Abortion used to be illegal, but some countries have changed that in the last years. As a result, people said that unborn babies have the right to live. While others said that it should be free choice. Although, women can do whatever they want to their bodies, they must think about the future of the baby. Abortion should not be legalized because there are other solutions, for example adoption.
The church has said that everyone has the right to live. There are people who said that God gave us the life and he is the only one who can take it from us. The unborn baby in innocent and he/she have the right to live. Abortion should be used only if women's health is in danger. For example, if she may die if the unborn child is born. In addition, if the woman had been sexual abuse, she might use abortion if she desires to.
Abortion should be a free choice, woman has to decide if she wants to have her baby or not. However, if she decides to have an abortion, she will have to handle the psychological impact. The psychological impact of an abortion can be feeling depressed for the death of your baby and you may feel that you killed your own baby. But women have the right to do whatever they want like the constitution said, so they have the last word. There are many women who don't have their baby because they cannot support it. Instead of having an abortion, you can give your baby to adoption. And if sometimes you want to see, you may have the option.
In conclusion, abortion should not be legalized because there are many options to solve the problem. Killing an innocent person is not fair for nobody. The unborn child does not have to pay for the actions of her mother. Everyone has the right to live and be someone in life. If the mother does not want to have the baby she can give it to adoption to someone who desires to have baby and can have a family and give love to the baby.
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You organized your paragraphs well, Denise, you just need to make each point clearer whether it is the opposing view or your view. When you talk about the opposing view- say so with phrases like, "People who support abortion think/say that..."
Other grammar tips:
"In the past few (not "last:) years"
"People are protesting (not "said") that unborn babies…"
Frag. “while…free choice” (combine with the previous sentence)
Abstract nouns don't need an article (life not the life)
Use plural when talking about something in general (“woman has the choice to live” should be "women have the right to decide...")
“give your baby (up for) adoption”
-Julie
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